It's alright, however there are a lot of things you could do to improve.
For starters, the watermark is a little distracting. I don't really mind much as it's much better than "other" watermarks (ahem, filmora)
Another complaint I have is that the videos don't have much discussion. I know it's only a minute and it's hard to animate long videos, but I wouldn't mind the videos being 15-30 seconds longer.
Anyway, other than that this was a good video.
edit: Hey, don't worry about it. I see a lot of potential in you!